Beauty must be seen.. {Part 2 - Unexpected Twist Challenge}

by Quizmaster

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  1. Beauty must be seen.. {Part 2 - Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    Wow, messed up. I had assumed that she was dumb (i.e. unable to speak) early on, but the fact that he cut her tongue out was twistedly cruel.
    It was a well done ficlet, with just a few minor typos. I enjoyed reading it, and thank you for entering.

  2. Beauty must be seen.. {Part 2 - Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    Quizmaster's Buddy Icon Quizmaster

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks. I’ll reread it for typos, I fear I rushed a bit to avoid the hassles of an untimely partecipation.
    The real pleasure was reading the other entries, I think your idea was really cool

  3. Beauty must be seen.. {Part 2 - Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    Evelyn's Buddy Icon Evelyn

    Posted 2 months ago

    Aww, poor thing. How horrid- but very nice, I didn’t expect that at all. I did find an “an” that should an “a” and I found a “his” that should be a “her”. (Don’t worry I make mistakes all the time too.)

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