Experimental Ficlet No. 19

by Writer4Life00nj

As you close your eyes you are supposed to see darkness, but all I can see is her face….................

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Experimental Ficlet No. 19

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 3 months ago

    Sorry but I’m pretty sure it was a girl they kept thinking about.

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 3 months ago

    i agree with the above

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    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wait the character is a guy? lol my bad

  4. Experimental Ficlet No. 19

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    it’s ok, I am sure people still get it.
    LoA

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Um, now it’s a guy the narrator’s thinking about?
    You’ve got some errors in this: it should read “supposed” and you write “his his face” instead of “is his face.”

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    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 3 months ago

    Okay sorry everyone, I messed things up a bit. I tried fixing it, if there are still any errors just please tell me! Sorry for the mistakes :(

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    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 3 months ago

    Okay sorry everyone, I messed things up a bit. I tried fixing it, if there are still any errors just please tell me! Sorry for the mistakes :(

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    Ooh, very nice and poetic.

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