What to do .Part one.

by PantherStar10

Lauren walked bravely into the high school. She was a new student transferred from Chicago. It was the first day of 9th grade for everyone but classes had already started. She walked into the office. No one was there. Fans everywhere blew the papers off the desks. Lauren didn’t know what to do. She walked down the hall looking at her scheldule. She went to a classroom door and knocked. Noone answered. She could see a teacher and students she walked in. The teacher was yelling really loud. She was old with wrinkles, she had white hair , and a long old dress. “Who are you” she snapped ” M-my n-name is Lauren I think I’m in this class” She said.”Lauren take a seat next to Alexandra” She yelled. ” WE only staight full names in this class” she said. The bell ring everyone got up. ” No your not leaving yet we wasted all our time chatting your missing your next class i’m not sorry” She laughed at her own “joke”. Alex and Lauren chatted the whole extra period turns out they had the same class every preiod.

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  1. What to do .Part one.

    LivExLaUGHxLoVEx's Buddy Icon LivExLaUGHxLoVEx

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WRITE A SEQUEL !!!

  2. What to do .Part one.

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 3 months ago

    Cruel, cruel teacher. Reminds me of one I had back in middle school. Its a good story but you’re having some of the same problmes that you have in your other ficlets. Spelling, grammar, and orginization. What I suggest is go back and read it once its done and whenever there’s a change in scenery or some one talks hit eneter and just make a new paragraph. That’ll help with the flow and it’ll make it an easier read. Besides that you’ve got a really interesting story here, can’t wait for the sequel.

  3. What to do .Part one.

    PantherStar10's Buddy Icon PantherStar10

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    okay i’ll try

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