Experimental Ficlet No.22

by Russell Ruffino

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There was a time when I called her my future, now she’s my past and I can never call her again.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Witty use of the word “call.” Man, this experiment sure has taken off.

  2. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

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    awww.. I have to sequel this!
    LoA

  3. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 3 months ago

    YES ! It lives!!! Lets keep this going!
    Great sequel btw.

  4. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good sequel!

    Perhaps we go to the tragedy now?

  5. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was the most brilliant line so far.

  6. Experimental Ficlet No.22

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 3 months ago

    oooh. love it!!!! very nice indeed.

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 3 months ago

    oooh. love it!!!! very nice indeed.

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    I love the use of the word “call.” Nice cyclical line; very nice.

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 3 months ago

    yes, i agree, best line so far.

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I also agree!

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 3 months ago

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    Wow, excellent! So much story for so few characters. :]

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 2 months ago

    I wonder what happened to the girl.

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