Speaking with the Twin

by penguincaptain18

“Oh hi Lucy,” Janice tried smiling but failed miserably.
“What’s wrong?” Lucy asked, full of concern.
“Lucy, you were wrong.” And so were YOU , Janice thought to the little voice, so much for always being right. The voice was too busy with its parade of curses and threats to pay any attention to her.
“What? When was I wro-” Lucy stopped, realization hitting her, “Kyle?”
“Yes Ky- him,” Janice cringed at the name that once set her heart flying.
“He hasn’t asked you out?” Lucy asked in disbelief.
“No. I thought he was but he didn’t. Got all my hopes up too.”
“Oh if he hasn’t by now I’m sure he will. You two are meant to be,” Lucy tried to reassure her.
Janice sat in silence, thinking.
“Lucy, have you ever read any of his writing?”
“Umm… maybe,” Lucy replied, her eyes hiding a secret, “Just a little.”
“You can see it can’t you?”
“See what?”
“See that he’s totally in love with YOU !” Lucy was shocked. She recovered quickly, “No. He does NOT love me.”
“How can you be so sure?”
“Beacause…”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Speaking with the Twin

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This line is awesome:
    The voice was to busy with its parade of curses and threats to pay any attention to her.
    Except it should read “too busy.”
    Sequel soon, or risk Flute Loop’s demise being on your hands!

  2. Speaking with the Twin

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yes, please sequel soon, or I will also face Flute Loop’s demise.
    sigh…
    great writing though. Fantabulous. Wonderiferous, awefanaticowonderous.
    Lol. And you’re doing fantastic with the whole suspense thing… I might not survive this afternoon…

  3. Speaking with the Twin

    AwkwardlyReversed's Buddy Icon AwkwardlyReversed

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yes yes sequel very soon.
    yeah i agree wid dreamer

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