bite

by music.is.life.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. bite

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. Great descriptions. You did a wonderful job portraying the emotions here.

  2. bite

    Jamie Rose's Buddy Icon Jamie Rose

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yes there were very good descriptions. I like how you said that the knife bit, not sliced. It really gave an intense mental picture.

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