Experimental Ficlet No. 27

by paper flowers

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...and it is that final memory of her that has made me decide what i should do next…

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Experimental Ficlet No. 27

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Hm… mysteriousness.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    Syntax is a bit messy; it should read “and it is that final memory of her,” so nix so the “with” and you’re golden. Good continuation otherwise.

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree, this is a great continuation, assuming you nix the ‘with’. Fun little series we have here.

  4. Experimental Ficlet No. 27

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like! I still wonder why she screamed.
    LoA

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 3 months ago

    I agree with Blu!!!
    LoA

  6. Experimental Ficlet No. 27

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    What did he decide to do?

    Good job building up the tension!

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 2 months ago

    I’m with Blusparrow, why was she screaming? You did a great job!

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