Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

by Mighty-Joe Young

The minivans screeched to a halt before the flaming mass.
“No Scott you’ll die” His wife screamed as she put a flying full nelson around Annette trying to enter the inferno.
The women exchanged swears in an ancient tongue that must have surely contained the phrase ‘Get off me bitch, that’s my husband’.
An explosion caused the steeple to crash through the rectory and a swarm of magpies tried to enter the church.
GET BACK THEY ARENT YOURS
Rosalyn ordered, as she held the red ring, and made smoke of the magpies.
Sully held up his hands, and two magpies flew out of the Hell on earth that had been the Persimmon Hill Pentecostal Tabernacle, to land in his perfect hands. He layed the spent birds on the ground, and they became the children’s fathers.
Jim coughed up blood and spoke sternly,”Listen to the witch Scott the instigator speaks the truth, give him the ring its no longer yours.”
Both women, still in a wrestling hold, yelled in perfect stereo, ” BENEJESUIT MOTHERS OF THE GRAIL not witches ASSHOLE !”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love the last line. I can picture the chaos so perfectly. Can hardly wait for the next installment.

  2. Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    look your last story was the best of the series it made me look like i was drawing coloring books and you were painting Salvadore Dahlia over them with oil paints, I had to really step up this one to try to keep it from being anti climactic(spell check says that is right but it looks so wrong) you really are a Phenom With a capitol Phenom.

  3. Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    hey john when you are done with this go read Anna Cristina’s new pic the poem if you dont laugh..well you’ll laugh.

  4. Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, now this is some chaos. I loved the last line. Really interested to see where this whole thing goes.

  5. Peripheral Evil Part 15 (An Evening in Hades)

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, chaos is the word of the day. Very cool scene.

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