The Lone Dollar (Personal Fantasy Challenge)

by EDBeale

I held my last dollar tightly in my fist until it bunched up into sharp edges. Somehow, it made the dollar more real.

With some hesitancy, I opened my hand and stared down at the wrinkled dollar with a heavy sigh. I hated when my money looked like crap. I took it between my pinched fingers and stretched it out.

“Well, little buddy,” I said to my money, “it’s down to just you and me now.”

I held it a little closer to my face. I couldn’t believe that this was it. Nothing else was coming and I had no idea what I was going to do.

“I don’t suppose you could get some of your friends for me, could you?”

I didn’t expect an answer…And if I had, that would have meant more problems for me. A strong gust of wind blew the dollar from my hand. I yelled out and chased it down the block before it was beyond my grasp.

I collapsed to the ground. There was nothing left for me.

...Until a large bag of money fell from the sky. Lazily, the lone dollar floated down to join the bag.

“Uh…thanks?”

Comments

  1. The Lone Dollar (Personal Fantasy Challenge)

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 2 months ago

    I like how in the beginning the future doesn’t look very bright, but then the whole fantasy comes in at the end and their future suddenly looks a lot better. Those last three lines were great.

  2. The Lone Dollar (Personal Fantasy Challenge)

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    I agree with paper flowers, you brought in reality and fantasy, very intersting =] Thanks for entering!

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