Nightmares

by Freedom

Jack tossed all night in bed. His mind was being tormented by images of his past. Images he wished were forgotten all together. But it was there, the thing he hated.

It was a year ago. Jack’s father, Mr. Tilton, had been waiting on the old sofa for his son. The sofa reeked but he wasn’t about to let it go. It was the only thing left of his dead wife and it was the only thing that made him happy.

Suddenly, Jack had walked in. “Do you know what time it is!?” His father’s voice rose, echoing off the walls.

Jack had cowered in fear at the stairs. “Um only after eleven, it’s not that late—“

His dad had cut him off, gripping his shirt and dragging him in close. He hissed, “When I tell you to be somewhere, you are to be there. Understood?” Jack had looked away. “Look at me when I’m talking to you!” Mr. Tilton reached out and hit Jack across the temple.

That was Jack’s worse fear. That was the thing that charged the negative energy toward Kit everyday.

And too bad … it wasn’t even his fault to begin with.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Nightmares

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sadly, we are often charged by the negative energy certain people impose upon us. But seriously, Jack may have a bad dad, but that doesn’t mean he has to treat the rest of us the same way. What a jerk!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Happily, I’m all up to date on this awesome series now. I hope you continue this, the sooner the better.

  3. Nightmares

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted 2 months ago

    Oh! I’m a little confused but I’m sure the sequal will make me understand!
    LoA

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Did Kit make him late?

    Or is he just transferring his bad energy to her?

    I kinda feel for the guy, as jerky as he is…

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    =O that is horrible. It doesn’t give him an excuse but it does give us some understanding to why he does what he does. Good job!
    LoA

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    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    No, this scene was from a year ago, OrangeOreos. And this is what makes Jack who he is.

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ah.

    Thanks for explaining.

    I sometimes get confused easily… :)

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