Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last)

by Ana Cristina

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Quicker than Jameson could say, “Don’t tase me, bro!” and even before he could formulate a single thought in his head, Officer Milo had pressed his triumphant Lu against Jameson’s side, sending numbing electric shocks into his body.

It was the worst pain Jameson had ever experienced. Even worse than the hangover he got in Cancun during last spring break, when Paul dared him to drink the whole Tequila bottle, worm and all. This was much, much worse.

Jameson lay on the floor, twitching, afraid to move even an inch. He wondered dimly how he’d gotten there. He didn’t remember falling down. A shadow suddenly loomed over him, and he recoiled instinctively.

“D-D-Don’t hurt me,” he stammered.

“Are you all right, son? Do you think you can walk?”

Jameson stood up on unsteady legs. “I…think…so.” His head felt like it was full of cotton and his side still felt all tingly. Then he felt something else – cold steel cuffs closing around his wrists.

“Good, because you’re under arrest for going 90 in a 45 mph zone.”

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  1. Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last)

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I laughed out loud at the end. Stupid me, expecting Officer Milo to have pity on the poor boy. What a hilariously jarring and sad, for the double-poor Jameson, last line. And that’s not to mention that he just got tased and definitely won’t be able to get to Prandi in time.

  2. Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last)

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ohhhh Buddy… Jameson is notttt the smartest boy in the world heehee =)

  3. Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last)

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Consider yourself served. I just wrapped up the sequel.

  4. Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last)

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Quicker than Jameson could say, “Don’t tase me, bro!”
    That reference had me cracking up. Hopefully, Jameson isn’t as big of an ass as that guy. I’m going to have to start reading this series, it looks good.

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