Jenny and The Cookies

by Rae Belkcit (LoA)

Once upon a time there was a little girl name Jenny. She was completely innocent; the kind of girl would never hurt a fly. But one day, Jenny met a very strange man outside the school. The man said his name was Bob Jairol. Jenny thought the man looked nice, so she went to Bob’s house. Bob gave Jenny some chocolate chip cookies. They were chewy and delicious. Bob showed Jenny his little cocker spaniel puppy. Then Bob said, “Do you want to see something really cool?” Jenny answered excitedly, “Yes, please, Mr. Jairol.” “Close your eyes, Jenny,” Bob said like the sweet man Jenny saw him as. Jenny closed her eyes, felt a sharp pinch in the back of her neck, and her eyes never ever opened again.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Jenny and The Cookies

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Scary, and very sad. You have a way of picking subjects that strike a chord with me, Rae, and putting them out there in the open with such a simplistic style that it’s very powerful. Kudos.

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