Bagman: Bad Business

by JLaughter

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Bagman: Bad Business

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow! Super! Holy shit that was awesome!
    I don’t have the same disinclination for repeating myself as your brother. So I feel free to use those words at will.
    Should it be “Not likely, I though. On either count?” It’ll throw you off by one character though. You could then change it to “kind of nasties” and “My thumb stabbed down on the switch.” That would even you back out I think.

  2. Bagman: Bad Business

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 2 months ago

    Solid advice as usual, John. I did some juggling.

  3. Bagman: Bad Business

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Holy shit that was awesome.

    Oh…and to Hell with you, John Perkins! You blew it up! You maniac!!!

    hahaha

    That made me laugh so loud when I saw that comment.

  4. Bagman: Bad Business

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Holy shit that was awesome.

    Oh…and to Hell with you, John Perkins! You blew it up! You maniac!!!

    hahaha

    That made me laugh so loud when I saw that comment.

  5. Bagman: Bad Business

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sorry…load problem…refresh…double post.

    I guess it’s a tripple post now…but i need to get the stars in there.

  6. Bagman: Bad Business

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ok, so I’ll say it… wow!
    Great pace, great gotcha at the end, great ficlet.
    Write more… now! ;)

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