No, You Aren't

by Never Explain

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I was hardly believing what he was saying. He must have a bunch of speakers set up or something….

“No you’re not.” I said.

“I am.” He said, his voice still booming.

“No, there is on way you are god.” I said incredulously.

“Oh, he’s GOD , alright.” A female voice said.

I looked to the source of the voice, and a girl, probably about as old as Tom, step out form behind him.

“Oh…hey, Nikki.” Tom said casually. “Nice for you to fly in.”

Fly?! I thought. _ What the hell does he mean by tha-_

I apparently had forgotten one important detail about Nikki…SHE HAS WINGS !!!

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  1. No, You Aren't

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Things are starting to get crazy. The ‘I am’ comment works well, that being the biblical name of God and all.

  2. No, You Aren't

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    huh.. is she like.. an angel perhaps? nice going.

  3. No, You Aren't

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like how he breaks his train of thought when he sees the wings. Nice touch!
    LoA

  4. No, You Aren't

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Angel, he walked into Heaven

  5. No, You Aren't

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Angel, he walked into Heaven.
    Your best series yet!

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