Those days

by Frostbite

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Do you remember those days? I can remember them well.
The tubes were so huge! And mom was there when you fell.
Days moved forward, on an unstoppable path,
Who are we to challenge them,
or to stand to times wrath ?
Years later we look back, to the times we held so dear, and wonder where they went.
We cant go back a day, a year, but hope our time was well spent.
But its funny to think, those days aren’t gone, they may merely be hiding in need of being found.
So tell me please, whats your new playground ?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Those days

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love this last line, it caputres the essence of the time between child and adult perfectly.

  2. Those days

    User 2864's Buddy Icon User 2864

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i love this poem, and also like the other person the last line.

    ~good job~

  3. Those days

    DisassociatedWord's Buddy Icon DisassociatedWord

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah, this is a great poem. i’ve always thought how childhood seemed so great, where’d it go? this really portrays that.

  4. Those days

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good Job Josh. (Tis your cousin, bri) I love it, REALLY GOOD !!!!

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