Minotaur

by Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Minotaur

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hahaha!

    Way to turn some random, slightly disturbing ficlet into something worthwhile!

    The last two paragraphs were great. For a second I thought she would take pity on the poor puppy…

  2. Minotaur

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 month ago

    How very sick and twisted. I like it.

  3. Minotaur

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “Burn it.”
    I agree with both above comments, I’m glad you could take something poorly written, add to it, and kill off the characters. I couldn’t have asked for more.

  4. Minotaur

    XxjerseyxgirlxX's Buddy Icon XxjerseyxgirlxX

    Posted about 1 month ago

    HOLY JESUS ! these storys are… undescribable. (not in a good way)

  5. Minotaur

    sunshine_loves_moon's Buddy Icon sunshine_loves_moon

    Posted about 1 month ago

    wow. this is written alot better than the last three. good job taking the story in a not as demented direction

  6. Minotaur

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m with RainDance. Thanks for killing off the characters. Although I hear the German Shepherd is still running around…
    By the way, in your second to last indentation, the “it’s” doesn’t need an apostrophe.

  7. Minotaur

    music.is.life.'s Buddy Icon music.is.life.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    hahaahahha that’s hilarious.
    i loved that.
    very disturbing series.interesting.
    sequel it.
    i want to see what else you have in store for this dog/human?
    (gag)

  8. Minotaur

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Ya this is a little better but still…gross.

  9. Minotaur

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Ya this is a little better but still…gross.

  10. Minotaur

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You have a sequel that I think finally puts this thing to rest.

  11. Minotaur

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i applaud you.
    =]

  12. Minotaur

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted about 1 month ago

    This was a fun spin on a poorly written series of ficlets.
    Continuity: The father wasn’t a German Shepard, it was a Great Dane.

  13. Minotaur

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted about 1 month ago

    wow. don’t burn the poor thing!!

  14. Minotaur

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    no! dont burn it!!

  15. Minotaur

    KDSfo'life♥♥♥'s Buddy Icon KDSfo'life♥♥♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    noo dont burn it!!

  16. Minotaur

    KDSfo'life♥♥♥'s Buddy Icon KDSfo'life♥♥♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    noo dont burn it!!

  17. Minotaur

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted about 1 month ago

    reminded me of Eraserhead…

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