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Dear Diary, Meet Teddy

by S. Lynn

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I guess I hurt Tommy more than I thought. He still hasn’t come back, and a few days ago the staff wheeled this cart out. There was something under this white cloth that was covering the whole thing, it was strange. I have no clue what that is about. But I wonder when Tommy will return?

Dr. Stephens came by to visit me after they wheeled that strange cart out. He was pleased that I had written something in here. And he gave me a gift! I love gifts! Especially if they are wraped in shiny paper and have one of those pretty bows on them!

The gift Dr. Stephens gave me didn’t have either, and I got mad. He said that he will bring a gift next time and will make sure that it is wrapped. The gift was a stuffed bear toy, with a blue checkered bowtie. I don’t like those…

Dr. Stephens said that I should talk to Teddy, share my emotions if I don’t want to write in here. He says that Teddy will keep me company. He was right, I like Teddy. He listens to me, understands me. No one else has before. He is my friend!

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Dear Diary, Meet Teddy

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome.

    Simply, purely awesome.

    you transitioned her simple train of thought and speaking extremely well.

    Good job.

  2. Dear Diary, Meet Teddy

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is wonderful. I think you did a fantastic job of keeping the theme and style of my prequel, and I love the introduction of the Teddy bear. As a child I had a stuffed bear that I named Ted, middle initial E, so this brought back memories of that one-eyed companion.
    You absolutely made my day, and wrote a wonderful ficlet as well. Thank you very much.

  3. Dear Diary, Meet Teddy

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 4 months ago

    Lovely job, it definitely flows from the prequel to this one very well. And I’m glad the main character has somebody to talk to. They really need it.

  4. Dear Diary, Meet Teddy

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Most excellent!

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