Mommy and Abuse

by Der Verfasser

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I stood there not knowing which way was home, infact, i didn’t know home. I didn’t know parents, shelter, or love. Everything nessecary in my life, i didn’t know of. I ran away from home at age 10, my mother knowing me leaving. See, there was abuse in my household, and no one could get out. Until the morning i was awoke from my slumber. I get ready for school, ditching and weaving, to get away from my Step-Father, so he couldn’t get a whipping in before i left. When i was at school i opened my knapsack and realized all of my books were gone. instead were about 20 pair of undergarments, 50 dollars, and a note from my mother.
It read:

My dearest son, please forgive me, but do not come
home tonight. Go to one of the homeless shelters and eat._ Use your money that i have saved for you wisely.
And above all remember that your not coming back becuase you love me, and I love you.

My deepest sorrows,
Mommy

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Mommy and Abuse

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    aaawwwwww, it’s so sad. It makes me want to cry. Especially the part where the note says you’re not coming back because you love me. That part is my favorite.

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    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really sad, but probably a reality in some homes, which makes it even sadder. Nice work.

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    ~little-writer~'s Buddy Icon ~little-writer~

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    dood i loved this story- your a great writer

  4. Mommy and Abuse

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great. I liked how at first, I thought he/her had made this decision on his/her own, but find out that the mum told him/her to.

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    Der Verfasser 's Buddy Icon Der Verfasser

    Posted about 1 year ago

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    Laine Grey-
    My dearest son

    it’s okay i forgive you, lol.

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    random_little_me's Buddy Icon random_little_me

    Posted about 1 year ago

    i rlly like it its very sad and is true in some homes you should become a writer

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    =( sad stuff!

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    TheWindBlows' Buddy Icon TheWindBlows

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was really good. Your a good writer.

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    Armour Vivant's Buddy Icon Armour Vivant

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was so sadd. I hate that it is a reality in the lives of some people. Your a veryy good witer. ..Props. haha.

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    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So sad. But so… much of reality. That happened to my friend. But he’s with his grandfather now.

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    User 2771's Buddy Icon User 2771

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thats so sad.

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