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I am girl who tells the truth.

by keepbreathing

I am girl who was careful to keep breathing when pulled into unexpected embrace.
“Colie?”
“Hmm”
I said looking up.
“I know exactly what I want. Its almost impossible to find, so I know when I do. When that happens I have no doubts.”
“Mhmm.”
“Since I saw you, I knew you were what I was after. I know I sound ridiculous, but I feel like I’ve known you my whole life. I hope im not scaring you.”
“No, of course not. I just wish I knew more about you….”
I admitted.
“No, you really dont want that.”
He broke it off looking down again.
“Sebastien?”
He looked up to meet my eyes for a brief moment.
“Yes?”
He said speaking to my left sleeve.
I paused.
“I love you.”
I knew I didn’t know him, and I knew it was stupid and irrational, and completely ridiculous, but those are the words my mind pressed me to say, because its all I felt.
Every inch of my body, love, love, love.
He looked back up at me now meeting my eyes, and smiled.
“I love you too.”
I am girl who is in love.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. I am girl who tells the truth.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    AWE ! so unrealistic yet so possible!

  2. I am girl who tells the truth.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    omg!! INSANE !!!! ....and amazing =)

  3. I am girl who tells the truth.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    ok it should be ILLEGAL to let someone go crazy this long waiting for you to SEQUEL !!!!

    ...X)

  4. I am girl who tells the truth.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    aw yea like unrealistic but so cute!
    LoA

  5. I am girl who tells the truth.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    unbelievably adorable.
    =]

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