The End of It All

by Freedom

The clock was ticking slowly, counting down the seconds of survival. The sky was becoming a dull black as dark clouds rolled in, capturing the sun and anything else beautiful.

Though the sky was being destroyed, people still scurried through the streets as if they would be safe by just running wild. No luck there. The end of the world was officially seen as the last speck of sunshine disappeared.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    ♥Juliana♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Juliana♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    o wow, thats good, very dramatic, i think you should go on!!

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    ♥Juliana♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Juliana♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    o wow, thats good, very dramatic, i think you should go on!!

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    Miss Cookie's Buddy Icon Miss Cookie

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good, very dramatic!

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That’s cool.

    I loved how someone finally acknowledged the fact that running around like a crazy person is useless!

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh wow! I love it Freedom!
    LoA

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    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Someone can sequel it if they want. Thanks for the comments. It was just a random story. There will be a lot more coming. I had to get my mind off series for a bit.

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I just sequeled!

    Hope it’s good enough.

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    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Wow this was really good and mysterious. I actually got a chill down my spine as I read this, lol. Great job!

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Chilling…

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted about 1 month ago

    intersting!

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    i would have to get a beer for the road

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