The darkness of Space

by Smile4life!

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She stood there, and looked at the world around her. Was she dreaming? Was she really sleeping next to her daddy in his warm bed, his arms enclosed around her?

She tried to make herself wake up, but she couldn’t. Was this really reality? Envoloped around her was a blanket of blackness, with small yellow specks.

She climbed over to one and sat down on it. She let her feet dangle. It was a star. A bright yellow star, but strangly, the light wasn’t blinding. The heat didn’t burn. Had she turned into something she was not?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The darkness of Space

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked the little detail of her feet dangling as she sat on the star.

    Very nice!

  2. The darkness of Space

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thx!
    LoA

  3. The darkness of Space

    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted 2 months ago

    Interesting. Open to possibilities. Nice descriptions.

  4. The darkness of Space

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is getting pretty interesting! Is she really all alone?
    LoA

  5. The darkness of Space

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    I like the imagery.
    Only one thing, it’s “strangely,” not “strangly.”
    (Sorry, I’m a really picky editor.)

  6. The darkness of Space

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    wow, this is a really cool thing going here! off to the sequel!

  7. The darkness of Space

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    wouldnt that make your butt hot , swingin on a star? good twist 3.97 stars

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