John Perkins Lives!!!

by Punkin

Was it just a ficlet of Elsha’s imagination or had someone moved John Perkin’s body.

Slowly, steadily, almost unmoving John Perkins “body” appeared to be moving toward the locked exit.

Eddie-Joe Young’s back was turned. He begun waving around his laptop, ranting, something about sequeling and never getting enough comments.

Was Ficlet’s back on-line? Did they really go through with it?

As the tumblers released, a loud click reverberted like the sound of a cocked pistol.

The door flung open with a crash.

All hell broke lose.

Jenunique, Pens and Feathers, and More Way rushed in.

“Read, reply, ficlet or die!!!!”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted 3 months ago

    Much gratitude to Krul(l)tar, for the awesome quote from http://ficlets.com/stories/36062.

  2. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL
    Was it just a ficlet of Elsha’s imagination or had someone moved John Perkin’s body.
    ^Best line ever!

  3. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m gonna have to join in this series at some point, LOL
    LoA

  4. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m gonna have to join in this series at some point, LOL
    LoA

  5. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted 3 months ago

    Please do. The more the merrier.

  6. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Although there is continuity issue, this is a great addition (and not because it quotes one of my ficlets). I agree with Lone Writer, Was it just a ficlet of Elsha’s imagination or had someone moved John Perkin’s body, is a great line.

  7. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    yes, it is! A superior line! Loved this continuation!

  8. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Oh, wow, I just noticed the ficlet part. That was good. =)

  9. John Perkins Lives!!!

    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks! I really like that line. I almost didn’t write it. I wrote a sequel, but I went back to look at the prequel again, I lost what I wrote and had to re-write it.

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