Befuddlement, part 2.

by invisibility_disability

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She sketched his perfect smile.

She drew his cruel heart.

She drew his loving arms.

She sketched his piercing eyes.

She made his ears that would not listen.

When she was finished, she smudged it all and wrote “BEDFUDDLEMENT” in big, bold, black letters across the page and stuffed it in his locker.

She cried, hoping he would finally get the message.

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  1. Befuddlement, part 2.

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ach.

    Short and sweet.

    Sometimes us guys need a little push for us to get it.

  2. Befuddlement, part 2.

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this was a very nice sequel, I loved it!

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