pretend.

by music.is.life.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. pretend.

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very, very good.

  2. pretend.

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    agreed, very poetic and well-written.
    i would loveee to see more of this.
    fantastic stuff.
    =]

  3. pretend.

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Marvelous poetry. Not quite sure why it’s marked mature, but very good none the less.

  4. pretend.

    music.is.life.'s Buddy Icon music.is.life.

    Posted 3 months ago

    thankyou very much.
    see what happens at like 1:30 in the morning?

  5. pretend.

    sunshine_loves_moon's Buddy Icon sunshine_loves_moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i lovee the repetition in the poem, i really like to do that in poems i write too. this is very well written. good job. 5 star +++

  6. pretend.

    Just another writer's Buddy Icon Just another writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    i really like this =) it is indeed very poetic but it’s not cheesy like a lot of ones are. Good job girly =)

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