Indecipherable

by g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

The only difficulty is there are some people that are indecipherable. At least, for a while.
I was sitting on a tree limb in a peaceful park when I felt a disturbance. Looking down I spied a girl, reading a book. I tried peering into her mind, but had to stop because it hurt too much; there was so much going on in there. But in the chaos I felt a paradoxical peace in her. I was so surprised I nearly fell out of the tree. The girl looked around calmly, & kept reading.
Hm. This was most troubling indeed. I never like to be puzzled. I’d have to do some investigation, find out what makes this girl tick. Lowering myself from the tree as quietly as possible, I toppled with an elephant thud. The girl started.
“Oh, hello!” she said with a pleasant smile. I forced a painful grimace, looking her in the eyes. I could tell she sensed I wasn’t the way I appeared, but she could never guess what was coming her way.
Oh, no one could ever guess what would come to the person when I was around to see the inner clockwork.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Indecipherable

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    you made this very personable, and yet it is still evil, the way he leeches and latches on. It makes me curious about the girl, what is in her mind, if she can see him for what he is, and if she can resist, or defeat him.

  2. Indecipherable

    Oy's Buddy Icon Oy

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Why was this tagged newchallenge?? interesting ficlet though…

  3. Indecipherable

    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Hmm. I didn’t think anyone would pick this one up. Thanks G2!

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