suicide in her eyes

by moonlight_girl

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no one ever noticed
she was cutting
no one noticed
she was trying to overdose
no one ever cared enough
to see the blood
or the cutts
no one ever seemed to ask why
she had gashes on her thighs
you all say your her friends
or your her family
but as she sit in her room
shes not sure you really care
because you never noticed
that she was trying to kill herself
so many times she tried
and with each try
it showed her you didnt care
because you never saw
what she was doing to herself
no one noticed the suicide in her eyes

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. suicide in her eyes

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Um… um… um… wow…. um.. can you say… Chelsea much?

  2. suicide in her eyes

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    God, I kinda know what that feels like… but not to the point of suicide. Sometimes I wish I could meet a girl that’s tired of no1 understanding the pain in her eyes… just like me…

  3. suicide in her eyes

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    a little on the melodramatic side, but I liked it none the less. “but as she sit in her room” should be changed to “sits”

  4. suicide in her eyes

    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted about 1 month ago

    trust me all i’m doing is telling the truth just from someone elses point of view

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