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A Beautiful Lie

by Bartimaeus

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By throwing that all away, by flat out lying to me, you killed me.
Why am I still here, you ask? Simply because I want you to see what you’ve started.
Look around you, for once in your self-centered life. Look your friends in the eyes for once, as if you care.
They’re hurt... So this isn’t just ‘about me’, and I’m not trying to ‘make a scene’.

All I’m doing is trying to make you see what damage you’ve done. Not only to me, but to my friends... some of which you don’t even know. Hatred, anguish and malice could have been avoided, if that’s what you’d wanted.
I don’t know whether you’re the reason for my pain and regret… but I do know that you could have saved everyone a lot of trouble if you had actually cared about someone other than yourself for once in your life…

Outrageous? Please… even the people you call your best friends are talking about you behind your back… about your selfishiness. So, I’m doing all of them a favor in telling you what a two-faced sucubus you are…

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Beautiful Lie

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    Posted 4 months ago

    oooh. this is really good. I like how he’s almost having a conversation but we can’t see her side of it! Wonder what she did??

  2. A Beautiful Lie

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting Scene. I wonder what she did also.
    LoA

  3. A Beautiful Lie

    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted 4 months ago

    that was really good and yea i wonder what she did

  4. A Beautiful Lie

    Just another writer's Buddy Icon Just another writer

    Posted 4 months ago

    amazing as always =) and if this is what i think this is about, then i dont need to ask “wonder what she did” like everyone else…hehe i feel special =)

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