Experimental ficlet #44

by Mighty-Joe Young

.....Then her Milky bedroom skin became smoke around my touch as she whisped away in the night breeze….........

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Experimental ficlet #44

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 2 months ago

    dude… one sequel per ficleteer.

  2. Experimental ficlet #44

    chakatreatmentson!(LoA)'s Buddy Icon chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I didn’t know there were RuLES ?! are there really rules? Iam now disheartened…

  3. Experimental ficlet #44

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Tell that to ALRO613 (LoA) too. Everyone has been cheating on that rule.
    LoA

  4. Experimental ficlet #44

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    ALRO613 (LoA)’s entries were all good though so i hate for rules to stiffle his creative spirit that would almost be un-awesome. so i wont post again on here sorry, about that, but dont get on ALRO613 because its hard to get people involved in a series so when people get invlolved, you dont want to fade them.

  5. Experimental ficlet #44

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah, I’ve cheated, tbs has cheated I think, so it’s all good. I loved the “milky bedroom skin” bit.

  6. Experimental ficlet #44

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    hey how come i always have to be surrounded by controversy?

  7. Experimental ficlet #44

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hehe… well.. originally, we i did a double entry.. and everyone seemed ok with it, in fact it was encouraged by Stovohobo, who started it .. so I just went with it.

    I say we keep it going.. as ideas come.. we should go with the flow.. That was ficlets is all about – in my view.

    BTW .. Awesome entry by your TRR !!

  8. Experimental ficlet #44

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    and clearly, i shoud learn how to spell … haha.

  9. Experimental ficlet #44

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hahah.. oh my.. shouLd… sigh ..
    I need a new keyboard.. no really.. !!

  10. Experimental ficlet #44

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    I cheated I admit it!
    And I will again!!
    I’m just going with the flow!!
    Peer pressure!
    I couldn’t help myself!!
    Please don’t punish me harshly! :)

  11. Experimental ficlet #44

    [ wall.doll ]'s Buddy Icon [ wall.doll ]

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “Milky bedroom skin”? Nice. Now I know who to model my writing after to avoid cliches.

  12. Experimental ficlet #44

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    @doll that is sweet.

  13. Experimental ficlet #44

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey, if I came across angry, I didn’t mean to sound that way. Sorry.
    LoA

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    no offense taken sparrow

  15. Experimental ficlet #44

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    Aww T_R why’d you go and give yourself one star!? You deserve more then that!

  16. Experimental ficlet #44

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    I’ve cheated…

    As long as they’re good, I don’t think it matters.

    I love the imagery. Now we know what she looks like!

  17. Experimental ficlet #44

    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted 2 months ago

    I haven’t cheated yet but I am about to. This is a fun one to sequel.

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