Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

by Bartimaeus

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I sighed, having been pushed enough toward my breaking point as it was. But no, he simply had to demand more, to get as much out of me as possible. Yet, there was something mysteriously attractive about it all… I quickly snapped back to my train of thought.

Why me?! Why couldn’t he have chosen some random unsatisfied blue-eyed floozy? But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!

Then I thought of what he said, after I’d kissed him.

More like ate his face…

I nearly gasped at my own train of thought, and he seemed to notice.
“So, you willing to give me something?” he asked, licking his upper lip just enough for me to see.
I scoffed at him.
“What kind of woman do you think I am?”
His eyes widened suddenly.
“Hey, hey! Calm down there, I was just having some fun.”
I sighed and shook my head.
“What do you want?”
He smiled secretively, and caught me with his blue eyes for a second or two.
“I want to come with you.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    AwkwardlyReversed's Buddy Icon AwkwardlyReversed

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha i like this guy

  2. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like her inner struggle here and he’s definitely managed to turn the tables on her!

  3. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Just another writer's Buddy Icon Just another writer

    Posted 2 months ago

    “more like ate his face” hahahah XD i like it

  4. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Their chemistry is warming up. Tienes un sequel.

  5. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Great back and forth and downright electric chemistry going on here. The first paragraph does a great job of spelling out her tenuous thought process.

  6. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yes, the first paragraph was fabulous! And the smarmy guy is going to get into trouble, I can feel it!

  7. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    He has a bit of a
    “I’m not sure if he’s a psychopathic stalker or not”
    type feel. If you know what I mean.
    LoA

  8. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    I don’t want to admit it, but I like this guy! He’s got nerve!
    “...But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!” I love this line, absolutely priceless!
    (And, to Eckhouse, don’t you mean tengo? because you said “you have a sequel”...)

  9. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    I don’t want to admit it, but I like this guy! He’s got nerve!
    “...But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!” I love this line, absolutely priceless!

  10. Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 2 months ago

    lol thanks X) and for g2: Eckhouse was correct in his conjugation of the spanish verb tener. you in spanish is tu, and the tu form of tener is indeed tienes.

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