Arnst Smells A Winner

by Ana Cristina

“Eva Gruder.”

There was a spark between them, in that shared hand clench. Eva pulled back as though she’d been scalded. Her stained glass eyes flashed violet and gold. Then she smiled shyly and shut the door.

Arnst walked home, carrying the woman’s flower-like, wool-heavy scent inside his heart. He carried, too, her name on his tongue, like a lozenge, sucking slowly to prolong the taste.

When Arnst arrived home, his mother dropped the book she’d been reading (which, by the way, was the Bible) and clapped her hands.

“I knew it! I told our no-good neighbors this was to be your year, the year that you’d meet and marry your wife! Tell me, my little wunderkid, what is her name!”

“Eva Gruder.”

Arnst hung his coat and sat down next to his mother at the kitchen table. He was still inside his head, so he didn’t notice the nervous flutter of his mother’s hands.

“Eva Gruder? The widow? Are you sure?”

Arnst looked up, his doe-brown eyes no longer stuttering but sure as stone. “I smell a winner, mama. I’m sure.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Arnst Smells A Winner

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    LOL Great series! I loved each one, they made a wonderfully insightful tale. I love how all of the senses are picked up by his nose, and I just knew the widow would be “the one”. :) Thanks for entering!

  2. Arnst Smells A Winner

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks for posting the challenge. It was one of my favorites. :)

  3. Arnst Smells A Winner

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was a very ingenious ending! ^^ I really did enjoy it. A very colorful entry. : )

  4. Arnst Smells A Winner

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Brilliant, Ana! I liked the way the Arnst associates smells with emotions.

  5. Arnst Smells A Winner

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Beautiful. Who knew smells could lead to such…. wonders. I think it’s something we who use our eyes take for granted.

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