Amazing!

by Blusparrow

“This is amazing!” I scream at the top of my lungs. I feel the breeze on my face and the horse glides across the beach. Seth and his horse ride next to me. We head closer to the water and the horses splash on through. I laugh and so does Seth. I feel free and like a kid again. When I was little my mom would take me and I would sit on her lap for the whole ride. Sometimes she would let me hold the rains. I look out across the glistening water then at Seth. He looks at me with his green eyes. He grins then looks ahead.

I groan as the ride ends. We dismount and I kiss him. “Thank you, for the amazing ride.”

Comments

  1. Amazing!

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    Posted 3 months ago

    awe so cute ! =) =D

  2. Amazing!

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    Posted 3 months ago

    Lovely moment, especially with the memory of rides with her mother. That second to last line should be in present tense though, to stay with the rest of the ficlet.

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