letting go

by moonlight_girl

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can you imagin a girl sitting in a space all alone tears rolling down her face. wondering how shes going to go on with her life. after all the pain shes been through. after every guy whos riped out alittle bit of her heart. after looseing her best friend who was like her big brother. after looseing a family memeber and a friend to suicide. after finding out her grandfather more like her father has cancer and is going to die. she drags a blade across her wrist wondering why she doesnt just end it all. with every drop of blood that falls down her arm. she feels alittle better like shes got a piece of herself back. it was her way of dealing. it was her way of letting go and moveing on.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. letting go

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    This reads like a poem, it’s a pity it’s written all jumbled together because it loses its meaning that way. Why don’t you break it into verse form? You could always post a part two if you run out of character space. Also, you should turn on your spelling checker because you’ve got some mistakes here.
    (Oh, and your buddy icon – did it inspire that poem you wrote or vice versa?)

  2. letting go

    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted 2 months ago

    the icon and the poem are just how i feel but yes they do kinda fit togeather

  3. letting go

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I hope you feel better!

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