Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

by Laine the Grey

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Author’s Note: This was really hard for me. All of my favorite villains/betrayers have some redeemable qualities. In short, to come up with someone ruthless took everything in me.

His name was long forgotten. ”’Mors’ is what I shall be called,” he would say in his deathly acidic voice.

Mors.

His purple eyes evoked a cold fear in the heart of his victims. His operations were almost always done in the dark of night.

Mors.

He had no accomplices; he worked entirely alone. His only enemy was himself.

Mors.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    I like the purple eyes detail, it’s very vivid!

  2. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Extremely vivid indeed. Thanks for entering!

  3. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Minimalist but menacing, especially the vague reference to his ‘operations’.

  4. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    Oy's Buddy Icon Oy

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Repetition+
    No Plot -

    It is interesting to see the evolution of a character, though

  5. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 2 months ago

    Operations. Very creepy.
    shivers

  6. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very short and not so sweet. Operations you say, cool.

  7. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    somhow creepy but i am still waiting for the jury lol

  8. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very cool.

    I love the repetition of his name.

    Mors sounds like a crazy doctor/scientist that works deep underground and laughs like a maniac.

    And has purple eyes, of course.

  9. Mors (Diabolical Challenge)

    N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)'s Buddy Icon N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    woah….

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