Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

by M.Paul Regret

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Meyer rose from his coffin, his fangs retracting. The night was his time to shine. To walk the city streets with the late night party goers.
This night was especially poignant as a film festival was having it’s opening night gala. Meyer of course had his ticket.
He wouldn’t miss this night for all the world.
Meyer was thirsty, the unquenchable kind that would take more than one victim to satisfy him.
Meyer sat in the back row, the better to see whom he wished to dine on this evening.

He spotted them in the front row, a Eurasian guy with glasses, sitting with a younger male wearing a black fedora, like some 1940’s gangster.

When the movie was over Meyer followed the lovers. Of course they attended the festival gala. He planned to make their acquaintance there. He knew his natural charm would be all he needed to seduce this couple into accompanying him home.
Draining them of their lifeblood would be pleasurable as well as a necessity to his remaining youthful and alive.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hope you sequel it and it becomes a series.

  2. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.

  3. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.

  4. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hopeyou sequel it and it becomes a series.

  5. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awesome Villain. Vampires make the best villains and nazi’s, he seems a modern day vampire, and if im reading correctly he’s gay..nice twist on the genre. he’s menacing, I hope you sequel it and it becomes a series.

  6. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    This could easily become a series! I enjoyed the retractable fangs. :) I also have no doubts he will succeed in his venture.

  7. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Either gay or just opportunistic perhaps. Carefully written with a nice pace. I thought the last line was a nice nod to the counter-point to his villainy, that this is what he must do to survive, like any natural predator.

  8. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 2 months ago

    “Menacing” is a good word to descibe the character you’ve created. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

  9. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    it’s his nature. I don’t find that too diabolical. Good descriptions though.

  10. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

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    Posted 2 months ago

    He doesn’t seem diabolical, and the description of the guy as “Eurasian” really threw me off. He looks… Asian? European? Possibly Middle-Eastern? Everything else was good.

  11. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hey i read the sequel and the girl pulls out a switchblade and guts him..

  12. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    Now whenever I go to the movie theatre and see someone staring at me from the back row, I’ll flip out!

  13. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    (Sorry I’m extremely late in my commenting…)
    This has nice pace, and contrary to what some were saying I get that he has potential to do something extemely diabolically evil. Well done!
    Thanks for entering!

  14. Diabolically Villainous Challenge: Give Me the Night

    N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)'s Buddy Icon N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    hmm, I’m not exactly a fan of the gayness, but oh well, other that its good.

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