My Inner Voice

by xxpinkislife23

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“Gwen, I’m scared, what if you’re right?” I said
“Please you know I’m right” She replied
“Then does that mean?”
“Yes,hun, he must die”
“but…i love him.”
” Love doesn’t change fate”
” You’re right love just makes it harder to let go “
“So, i’ll take this as your acceptance”
“How can i accept this…this is terrible”
“Oh boy here she goes again, hun please just relax you know acceptance is the best way to deal with this”

Deep down i knew my inner voice was right. I just couldn’t accept what she was saying. Please try to understand what i must be going through…No…how can you…..

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  1. My Inner Voice

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    oh.. interesting. this deffinantly needed a prequel, which set this up nicely.

  2. My Inner Voice

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    Just a quick fix, you have a couple i’s that should be I’s. =] but otherwise, pretty much amazing!!

  3. My Inner Voice

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    Posted 23 days ago

    do you think italics might have done this more justice than bold?
    it is a good story though

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