Death and Circumstance

by Laine P. Grey

I almost forgot my purpose. I wondered if she really saw me, or if her eyes had simply wandered in my direction.
“Where are you taking him?” Her voice was free of all emotion and of all reason. “I mean, where is he going?”
That’s the question I imagined they would ask if they could.
And I’m nearly never wrong.
I couldn’t answer her. They don’t tell us things like that, if you’re wondering.
Her face remained resolute as she stroked the face of Andre’s soul. “This is the second one you’ve taken from me.” Her voice was rough but quiet.
Ashamed, I turned away from her. My job here was done.
My job is done. My job is done.
I refused to look into her eyes again.
They say that Death is heartless.
That may be, but Jeff has a heart, indeed.

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  1. Death and Circumstance

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. This was tragic. Good job further developing Jeff/Death’s personality.
    Oh, and you totally busted me. I finished reading The Book Thief in the wee hours of the night yesterday and I bawled my eyes out, scaring my cat. This inspired me, but I wanted to give it a more humorous edge, like Woody Allen’s portrayal of death in his writing and films.

  2. Death and Circumstance

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, Jeff really hates his job.. gut wrenching.. in keeping with Ana’s premise. wonderful job.

  3. Death and Circumstance

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think this follows really well! Great job! I still get that “human” feel from Jeff, and the girl speaking to him was just chilling! Awesome!

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