Death Distraught By an Angel

by g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

But before I could step down from my place, I was whisked across the river to an alley behind a seedy resturaunt. Crouching in the shadow of a dumpster was a small girl that would barely reach my waist, shivering violently, coughing terribly, but managing to weakly sing “Castle on a Cloud” to a bright pair of green eyes. The eyes belonged to a sleek black cat, which she stroked tenderly as she sang. It nearly broke my heart, she sang so sweetly. Then, shaking, she collapsed. The cat looked worriedly at her, then sniffed her. Looking to me, he gave me a gaze that cried, “Please don’t take her yet! We’re all we have left!”
I felt a tight pain in my chest. I had to do my job! No, I had to save this angel! Duty or plea? If I did as I was supposed to, I’d tear this family apart. If I saved this girl, I’d be denying my job. Oh, why this angel, why this cry, why this night?
Sighing, I assumed a human form with difficulty, tenderly lifted the girl, motioned to the cat to follow, and carried her down the street.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Death Distraught By an Angel

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    He’s the most compassionate Death ever. Heart breaking.. reminds me of the Little Match Girl. ok tear coming down my cheek now..

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    My dear, a sequel is the highest form of compliment on this site. I’m honored. And I like the idea of Death going off and having his own adventures. Stay tuned to my next sequel – I’ll have him going in a slightly different direction, though not unexpected, I think.

  3. Death Distraught By an Angel

    [ wall.doll ]'s Buddy Icon [ wall.doll ]

    Posted 2 months ago

    Beautiful. I love how compassionate and human you’ve made Death, and I love how you showed his inner struggle and desperation. Especially in the line Oh, why this angel, why this cry, why this night?

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