The gift and the question

by Bartimaeus

After that day, Rob came to visit the orphanage every other day on his lunch breaks and on weekends. Laia seemed to like him alot, though I still was a bit unsure about him… I got over the initial feelings of mistrust for him, and began to enjoy his presence almost as much as Laia.

“Look what he got me yesterday!”
She held a red ribbon up to my face so I could clearly see it.
“It’s pretty.” I said, “Why don’t you put it in your hair?”
“Well, I don’t wanna mess it up!”
I furrowed my brow, confused.
“Isn’t a ribbon supposed to make your hair look better?”
“Well yea, but…”
Her eyes shifted from left to right, as if looking for an answer.
“Oh, nevermind, I’ll wear it tomorrow, k?”
I shrugged.
“Ok.”
I thought about arguing with her, but let it go. Then, another thought crossed my mind.
“Laia?”
“Yes, Tommy boy?”
“I said not to call me that!”
She giggled.
“Sorry, I won’t do it again… conitnue.”
I sighed.
“Do you think Rob wants to adopt you?”
She froze where she was and caught my eyes.

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  1. The gift and the question

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Good question! And what a cliffhanger! It was the elephant in the room and it has been pointed out!

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    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sequel please!!!!

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    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sequel please!!!!

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sequel please!!!!

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    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sequel please!!!!

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    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sorry that posted like 5 zillion times.

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    AwkwardlyReversed's Buddy Icon AwkwardlyReversed

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yush sequel.
    yeah great cliffhanger.

    gah it wont let me rate.
    well i give it
    5/5

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