Needle in the Hay

by Nouvelle Bardot

We’re projected at seventy miles an hour down the interstate by forces we can barely imagine. He looks over from his rigid driving position, nervously glancing at me, asking if he should turn down the a/c. Asks if I’m cold.

So many times its making me uncomfortable. I sit back, my sketchbook clutched protectively in my lap and I watch the sky whip by. So much sky. So much unpolluted blue sky its almost obscene.

Its almost hypnotizing. The thought of a wide open unknown. Empty space. Land bare of corporations and strip malls. Just a solitary abandoned house from the pioneer days in the middle of a sea of nothing. Like a gravestone. Silence. I wonder what it must have been like…to live in the depths of an unknown land, and all that silence. Pure, sweet silence.

“What are you thinking about?” He asks.

“Nothing,” I respond.

“You have to be thinking of something.”

“What if nothing is something?” I ask.

“Like silence?”

“Exactly,” I say, and turn up the music.

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    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted about 1 month ago

    This was really cool! (pardon the pun)
    i loved your imagery in this.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Lovely snapshot of someone’s thought process. And welcome back to ficleting! Woohoo!

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Love the snippy dialog towards the overprotective male. And fabulous imagery! The lone house reminds me of a puzzle I have, so you know it is picturesque!

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i, too, love the imagery you have in this. beautiful descriptions.
    =]

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