A Deadly Phonecall

by Bartimaeus

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I spent so much time thinking about her that I almost forgot about my depression. It seemed as though the clouds had lifted, and the sun that was her face shone brightly on my heart. It stayed like that for a while, until one day I got a phonecall…

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The phone rang loudly, penetrating my earbuds as I was writing yet another ficlet.
Wow… i think that’s my seventh today…
I picked up the phone and paused my music.

“Hello?”
“Umm, hey Tyler, it’s Candi…”
Her sad tone weakened my smile just a tad.
“Hey, Candi, what’s up?”
She sighed heavily, and from what I could tell she was supressing tears.
“It… It’s about Kat…”
I frowned.
“What about her?”
“Well… I was talking to her… and I kinda… found out the real reason she broke up with you…”
My smile faded completely, and I could feel anger in my eyes. It’s a good thing she can’t see me…
I managed only two words through my clenched teeth.
“Tell me…”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Deadly Phonecall

    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted 2 months ago

    hold strong one girl left but u have one thats standing by you always remember that

  2. A Deadly Phonecall

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    You can feel his anger rising. Love it!
    LoA

  3. A Deadly Phonecall

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ahh, I want to know!

  4. A Deadly Phonecall

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 2 months ago

    what?!
    no!
    he was so happy.. =[.
    =]

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