Sensing a Vision

by Psylamia of the Skies

“Are you the psychic?”

Fox’s bored gray eyes rolled up and looked across the smoky room at the young woman who had entered. He looked her up and down, then sat down his book and took the cigarette out of his mouth, exhaling a cloud of gray smoke. “That’s what it says on the door.”

She marched over and shoved her palm into his face. “I’m Hillary McCallister.” Just from the way she walked Fox knew that he wasn’t going to like the woman. She reeked of money. He took her hand and shook it limply, but said nothing. Hillary cleared her throat expectantly and Fox put the cigarette back in his mouth. “You are Fox Caprio, are you not?”

He met her eyes then. She had flipped the ‘r’ in his name, the original Italian pronunciation. He wondered if it had been a guess, or something more.

“Yeah,” he took the cigarette out of his mouth again. “I’m Fox. What do you want Hillary?”
“Mrs. McCallister.” She quickly corrected him.
Mrs. McCallister. What do you want?”

“I believe you can help me.”

He raised an eyebrow.

Comments

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  1. Sensing a Vision

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whether or not this is sequel, it is a very good lead-in to a story. It makes me long to hear more.

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    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sequel = sequeled

  3. Sensing a Vision

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    ok way to hit us with the cliffhanger sequel it please

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    Psylamia of the Skies' Buddy Icon Psylamia of the Skies

    Posted 2 months ago

    I give to you, good people, a sequel-

    http://ficlets.com/stories/38156

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