Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

by ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

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Locke entered the space-hatch eyeing her zero-grav suit. After a once over, she punched the comm-box on the wall,
“Frosty, have we any idea of the conditions over there?”
There was a crackle, “Not one. Since docking, we have limited scanning, but it’s all inconclusive. I wouldn’t trust these readings as far as I could throw the russian!”
Karapov sniffed, and slipped on his zero-grav suit.
“Fine. We’ll go in heavy.” Locke switched the comms off, and opened a locker. She eyed the doc and Frosbeld’s suit, “You’ll fit in this. You may be a little small for it tho,” she tossed the suit at his feet.
“Aye aye, cap’n!” sighed the doc, “What is going on anyways.”
“Just put the suit on!” Locke stripped to her undershirt and shorts and pulled her ZG over her shoulder.”
“I should know what i’m getting myself into here!” Morris admonished.
Karapanov said, “We’ve docked with a derelict 20 years old. Scans see nothing. She’s a ghost.”
Locke shot, “Frankly, we don’t know what’s going on! So suit up, and keep quiet!”

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  1. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    its action packed i do feel like hg wells reading it in reverse though

  2. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ok now i went back and read them forward so i am caught up lol

  3. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    goofy T_RR
    Anyway, I like the tension and comedy in this scene!

  4. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey past me should have paid better attention and future me says me from sixteen days ago shouldnt have drank so much lol i wish you had said she stripped to her sports bra and panties

  5. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey then she could of looked queerly at the doctor and he could have replied, “sorry i dont i wear underwear under my space suit it rides up in the rigging, its space you have to get comfortable.” lol just needlin ya

  6. Amethyst Frontiers: Derelict

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey maybe you can hire me to write comic relief and sexual tension scenes when you sell the screenplay. hint hint

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