Sleepless In Atlanta

by Bartimaeus

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That night, I dreamed of Rose again. Except this time I didn’t just see her. We were walking together down the streets of some city. We were laughing, and holding hands as we walked. She wore a cute blue blouse that matched her eyes, along with jeans.
We stopped at an interesection, waiting for the traffic sign to say ‘Walk’. She said something to me then, and I turned, melting when I saw her face. It was full of the deepest affection I’ve ever seen in a human’s face… No wait, an angel’s face…

After a moment of taking in her vivid beauty, she whispered something softly to me, and kissed me…

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I woke up in awe, sitting up and looking around my room for her.
No… it was a dream..

I sighed in disappointment, and laid back down on my bed.

How can this be happening? I barely know her, and she lives hundreds of miles away…

I pictured her face in my head again, and then a startling thought crossed my mind.

Am I… falling in love?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Great flow and balance to it. I really felt for this guy having these vivid, totally throwing dreams, and the wondering/worrying about his growing emotional attachment. It would be exhilerating and frightening I think.

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    man i was sucked into it mushy ness and all i was kind of like dang its over

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is a lovely series. I’ve really enjoyed it immensely so far, and as I said before, you guys have done a really good job. It is really sweet and heartwarming. Great job! : )

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks so much for all the comments and feedback! Im enjoying reading them as much as I am writing this series, and that’s alot! =)

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yeahh! woot woot =P hahaha. lovely addtion Bart. OMG I just love the title!! ((after thought..))

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yeahh! woot woot =P hahaha. lovely addtion Bart.

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    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    love it and see it is possible to fall in love with someone millions of miles away i think thats what i’m doing lol

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    u’ve been sequeled!!

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yes, I think you are, Bart! Such a sweet series!

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yes, I think you are, Bart! Such a sweet series!

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    yes, I think you are, Bart! Such a sweet series!

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 29 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hehe, he is falling in love!
    LoA

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    Posted 29 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awwwwwwwwww =]

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 24 days ago

    truly, truly romantic.
    very cute.
    =]

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    1angelette's Buddy Icon 1angelette

    Posted 14 days ago

    The title is the ROTFLOVE , and this series… is so wonderful… I wish I had time to give five-stars to every one…

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