Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

by Mighty-Joe Young

The dragoons rode back into the camp and dimounted before the knight.
“Sir the mission was a failure.”
“How?”
“We never arrived at the fortress. we could see for miles away it was hell on Earth. We past hordes of soldiers running for their lives. They were saying the devil had come for them.”
“What is going on here?” asked Perceval?
They heard the sound of wings and Mardy appeared over head with ten men in her clutches, still steaming with heat.
she dropped them on the ground from about fifteen feet and they did not have enough strength to run.
“Which one is he?”
“Pardon me?” Asked The fair knight.
“Well when i first began to ask, ‘where is Olgoth’ noone knew. Then when i started grilling them alive they all were Olgoth.”
Perceval didn’t know weather to laugh or cry when one of the men rose to his feet and replied, “I am Olgoth the Freeman.”
His partially burned skin did not even flich when Kira ran and hugged his father.
“Perceval.”
“Yes Olgoth.”
“Thank you cousin.”

Comments

  1. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Dude! Super-fun series. You and Elsha are doing awesome…
    I love this stuff..

  2. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    thanks alro i think the writing i have been doing with elsha and jenunique has really helped me to emulate their style of descriptive narrative. I kinda feel like a parasite sometimes but it is fun. but man helen keller could write with elsha and it would be good lol

  3. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    LOL ! I love that you tied all of the family members together. Olgoth didn’t know what was coming! And it seems this war will be a bit one-sided!

  4. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    oh we can fix that

  5. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    LOL , yes, yes we can!

  6. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    sequelled!

  7. Hell on Earth at the First of the Five Ring Fortresses.

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    Posted 24 days ago

    yay!!! his father came home! sorta…

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