One Comment, One Chance

by Bartimaeus

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By the time Violet Hill finished, Id wiped most of the tears from my eyes, and my cheeks were red from being rubbed so many times. I took out the earbuds and put my ipod on the bed.

Ugh I probly look horrible.. Im gonna take a shower..

I looked in the mirror to find my face still distorted from the hurt, and my cheeks still bright red.
I turned the water on full heat and got in the shower eagerly, longing for the sensation of the soothing hot water pouring over my skin. I took a deep breath, inhaling the steamy air and trying to relax.
I suddenly found myself unable to stand, and sat down in the shower, staying that way for several hours until the hot water ran out.

After drying off and changing my clothes, I went back to the computer, getting another mouse from my dad’s office.
I went straight to ficlets, and saw Rose had written one a few minutes ago. took a deep breath and clicked on it.
After reading, I dared to leave a comment.
Umm… long distance calls dont cost too much, do they?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. One Comment, One Chance

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 28 days ago

    haha. yes they do! =P

  2. One Comment, One Chance

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 28 days ago

    hmm another shower scene? And long distance calls can be expensive, especially those that last for hours!

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 28 days ago

    Yes, he likes the shower XD
    aww poor tyler, he probly just wants to hear her voice for a few minutes X)

  4. One Comment, One Chance

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 28 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Showers are where people do there thinking, LOL I should know…
    LoA

  5. One Comment, One Chance

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 28 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Showers are where people do there thinking, LOL I should know…
    LoA

  6. One Comment, One Chance

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 27 days ago

    The hot shower just takes in how hurt he really is!
    LoA

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 27 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Showers can really help bad situations a lot =]

  8. One Comment, One Chance

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 22 days ago

    thank you jesus for hot water.
    and yeah, long distance calls do cost quite a lot!
    =]
    P.S. i’m honored.=DDDD

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