Friends Forever (Part 1)

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

My heart pounds in my chest. I can’t do it. I turn to leave.

The door opens. “Jason?” she asks, half-awake. “What’s wrong?”

I’m committed now. After this, she may think I should be.

“Claire…” My voice catches. Just do it, dammit! “I… We…” Coward, I curse myself.

“Get in out of the rain,” she says, worry tainting a voice I’ve always found musical. “I’ll put on some tea, and…”

“No!” I blurt out. “No, if I come in, I’ll lose my nerve completely. Come up with yet another lie to keep from saying what I have to say. What I’ve wanted to say for so long.”

Now, she really looks concerned. “It must be something important.” A slight smile. “In fifteen years, that’s the most I’ve ever heard you say at one time.”

“You’ll hear a lot more from me. I’m not sure how much you’ll believe, or how much you’ll want to. But if I don’t tell you now, I may never get the chance again.”

“Jason, you’re scaring me.” She stops, suddenly, frowning. “Woah. Deja vu. Serious deja vu.”

“Claire, you have no idea…”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Friends Forever (Part 1)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ah, the cliffhanger ending. :D

  2. Friends Forever (Part 1)

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I was all wound up waiting for him to explain himself and then came the dreaded and much enjoyed cliffhanger.

  3. Friends Forever (Part 1)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    Welcome back! I hope this comment posts. Awesome start!
    LoA

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