Absolutely beautiful; a personal tragedy within the end of the world.

awesomely amazing

This has a very epic feel to it, and any fic that uses the word “twain”just has to be epic.
Five happy stars (rating’s still down, but hey at least the site’s up :p)

Like Ana said: epic. Very beautiful descriptions with the tragedy within the tragedy.

A truely beautiful scene of someone who cherished another more than their own life, and more than the fate of mankind.

Should “felled before her time, felled just before” use a semicolon rather than a comma there?
Great job as usual. Nice to see you’re still making the rest of us look bad with your superior skills.