picture perfect memory

by thumbtwiddler

Side by side. Moment by moment. The memories were drawn together and woven through the holes in my memory were rosebeds waiting to bloom. Rust colored skies, bright blue bikes, yellow sparrows, green grass, all fenced in by a black thread of honesty. The thorns crept through the vangaurd of truth to catch at my shirt sleeves and shred my pride with what I’m hiding.

The colours ran with each tear I shed.

Which was odd, because I didn’t think colored pencil color could bleed.

The tip of my finger swept up some sapphire tears and I tasted freedom, clean freedom.

The red sky I’d sketched smelled bitter.

I saw the green, green grass and visions of success came with waves of dollar bills.

I heard the yellow birds chirping, and I thought it was joy.

I felt the black edged picture shake with fear.

I found a new crisp white sheet of paper and I felt hope.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. picture perfect memory

    Violette Fleur's Buddy Icon Violette Fleur

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really love that. Your vocabulary and word choice makes the story absolutely phenomenal. great job! I hope I can write like that someday!

  2. picture perfect memory

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like your imagery. It’s wonderful. A few places I got tripped up with the wording, but it’s still great!

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