Shiny Mudballs

by l.m.orchard

The pair boosted forward into the asteroid’s single inset airlock, pulling a cargo sled behind them. It eased into the habitat’s half-gee field, dropping to bump once against the floor plating before settling into a hover.

“Shit, careful with that!” Jim warbled, his comm voice all square-waved. “They won’t take any if a single one is deformed!”

“I know, I know,” said George, “watch your end. Damn, but these creepy critters are picky.”

The outer doors sealed and, after a quick hiss of atmosphere in-rush, the inner doors irised open. Inside, the Customer waited – a glistening and limp de-shelled snail draped across a life-support hover.

Jim unsealed the cargo coffin, neutral gases and coolant spilling away to reveal exactly 38 dorodango. As documented in the triply-verified manifest, one autistic Japanese child had shaped each into sub-micron spherical perfection and a near-mirror finish.

George and Jim left that day with enough money between them to buy their own orbital paradise and retire happy men.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 3 months ago

    Interesting read, but consider rating mature for languege. Or perhaps I am just too picky there myself. Anyway, nice job.

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    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Refreshingly realistic, compared to the large body of bad sci-fi out there.

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    mmmarmalade's Buddy Icon mmmarmalade

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very interesting and imaginative!

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    Compound Fracture's Buddy Icon Compound Fracture

    Posted 2 months ago

    Perhaps you’re too picky? Yeah. Think so.
    Nice story. I might meditate on a sequel.

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    xxcatiexcatxx's Buddy Icon xxcatiexcatxx

    Posted 2 months ago

    Mature for language?
    I use way worse language on a daily basis :3

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