Someone like you

by Sailor Emo

Hidden behind the doors of insecurity, closed off with the lock of fear, lies my love.
No one may enter, only I hold the key.
There was once another who knew the way in, but now he is gone, never to return again.
There once was a time when my love flowed free, when my green eyes sparkled with the stars that he stole for me, straight from the night sky.
Who could’ve known that every thing that he said was just another lie.
I didn’t know untill now that I was looking for someone that I could love, someone that I could hand my key to.
Someone just like you.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Someone like you

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I adored this story. I’m one of your favorite writers?

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    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    8th grade ??? O.O wow. I’m liking this though its really really good.

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    xbluxmoonx's Buddy Icon xbluxmoonx

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    yay i liked this. it was really good.

    forks, washington? i recognized that from stephenie meyer’s books. _

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    xbluxmoonx's Buddy Icon xbluxmoonx

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    gah, i forgot to rate. heh

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    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this. It’s very interesting and intriguing. The imagery in the beginning is good.

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    maddiemae 's Buddy Icon maddiemae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    very pretty. well written
    :)

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